IndoorOrnithology's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Amy's First Platform Test]

Not bad for a first game. Has a few problems though:
I died and the re spawn didn't work.
Also the collision detection for the spinning arrow thing seems off.
The scaling is a little off. (about a ten pixel white border around the game on my browser.)
I gave it 4 stars because it was a first try. If you find yourself an art style, make a character, and get some sounds, you can turn this into a finished game. Can't wait to see what else you create.

AmyJoy2213 responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! It was really helpful. Hopefully I can refine my skills and eventually create a full length game without glitches :)

[Deletr - Preview]

Couldn't tell between the two blue colors. Pretty fun though.

tinytouchtales responds:

hey, got that feedback several times now, will look into this! thanks!

[Orborun]

Pretty good. A little hard, but very fun. A few things that should be added:
A key to replay a level
A "Press any key to dismiss" message on the tutorial screens
Slightly better graphics
I had a fun time with the game!

Invenis responds:

A key to replay a level: you can press R, it's mentioned in controls ;)

[Traffic Wonder HD]

Good game, but really annoying how I wait like a minute for it to load, and then I have to wait for the ad to go away. Can't you just play the ad in the time it takes to load? I do like the puzzles though.

alejogn responds:

Hi, thank you for your feedback. Downloading time and ads were not expected to take longer than 10 secs between levels, however it is very relative to your internet connection speed and accessibility to the main internet knots (America and Europe), we are so sorry to hear it is taking that long.

[Game of Life]

Very fun. I just wish you could drag the mouse to make lines, because clicking every single square you want alive separately is annoying.

Vulgarman responds:

Thanks, will do.

[Letter Weave]

Cool Game. The only complaint I have is very small. None of the menu buttons highlight when you roll over them. Not a big deal at all though.

fine0023 responds:

fixed menu buttons!