IndoorOrnithology's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flapsy the Bird]

PLEASE! No more flappy bird! Do something original!

[Flappy Bird]

It's well made, but that doesn't stop the fact that it's a shameless rip-off of an already lazy game. By the way "If you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all" really doesn't apply here, because this is a REVIEW. The whole point is to say if the game is good or not, and this one isn't.

bwuk responds:

its a re creatioin, seriusly, try making a simple game before you review one and judge it, its sorta hipocritical of someone to say things about games if they have not created one or know how dificult it is to do so, see it as a fun re creation, you dont see me adding ANY ads to my games do you?... im here for the fun, not this types of hate and bad scores they give when infact that have never made a game.

[Cyroad]

Something seems off. I love the visuals, and the gameplay looks fun, but for some reason I don't find myself enjoying it very much. The sense of speed just isn't there for me. On the other hand, the actual design of the game is very well done. The blocks in the road are a bit hard to see though.

[SL Body Pinball]

So little effort it's unbelievable. Must try harder.

[Spiral Pulse]

So, you re-posted the same game, but removed the flappy bird reference. Now it's just a shameless knock-off of super hexagon. Please try to make something original.

[Hexy Bird]

I don't get how this is a "parody". You just ripped off hexagon/super hexagon and changed the little triangle to a bird. While it is very impressive visually, the lack of any originality means I can give you no score.

[BouncyBit!]

To me, this is a perfect kind of mobile game. I don't have a smartphone to try it, so I only played it online, but it does feel like something you would take out on a bus or plane for a couple minutes at a time. Pretty good.

[Mr. Pew]

Pretty fun, nice style. Only problem is that the jet pack doesn't work properly. Sometimes the background shows a jet pack, but I get reverse jump, and sometimes it shows the down arrow but I get jet pack. Other than that, really fun. Deserves a mobile app.

[Amy's First Platform Test]

Not bad for a first game. Has a few problems though:
I died and the re spawn didn't work.
Also the collision detection for the spinning arrow thing seems off.
The scaling is a little off. (about a ten pixel white border around the game on my browser.)
I gave it 4 stars because it was a first try. If you find yourself an art style, make a character, and get some sounds, you can turn this into a finished game. Can't wait to see what else you create.

AmyJoy2213 responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! It was really helpful. Hopefully I can refine my skills and eventually create a full length game without glitches :)

[DJManiax]

This is really cool. Being a big fan of rhythm games, it really made my day. The only problem I see is that the notes can be off sync, and I have to choose between hitting the notes on beat, or getting a better score. Doesn't happen often though. Also, it is a bit too easy to get a fantastic. Still, a really fun game.